The theme of the story is very positive, and the repeating routine successfully gives a sense of tiredness and powerless. However, I think there can be more options and multiple endings to establish your theme better. What if the character tried something new? What will change if he ask for help? What make things worse?
The trailer is really outstand as a Twine game. The blur and the music is very impact. Overall good work! Hope to see more in the future!
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The theme of the story is very positive, and the repeating routine successfully gives a sense of tiredness and powerless. However, I think there can be more options and multiple endings to establish your theme better. What if the character tried something new? What will change if he ask for help? What make things worse?
The trailer is really outstand as a Twine game. The blur and the music is very impact. Overall good work! Hope to see more in the future!